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slowly inhale the harsh air
i find it hard to breathe
and it's not just a feeling
no it's not just a tease

something is happening
strange and unpredictable
foul and now disturbing
this is not fictional

one shot to make this work
a sole opportunity for success
not a responsibility to shirk

no pressure...
©2008-2009 ~bLaCkDaWnRiSeS
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Author's Comments

so this poem means a lot of things for me~

1. trying to get into med school, trying to decide if thats what i really want to do, feeling i'm running out of time
2. my friend recently passed away, so it means you have one shot at your life... don't screw it up, live your life to the fullest
3. and finally the world itself and how we humans only get one planet earth... and we are destroying it....

decide what it means for you...

oh and ps~ the last line is sarcastic :D

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